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Monday, January 17, 2011

Winners

Before I announce the winners, I would like to give my opinion on their stories. Starting with Life, I specifically said NO LESS THAN 150 WORDS but since I'm nice, I still consider it as your entry story. I was hoping for more cunning words put into a sentence so when I read it, I feel enchanted to read more. Other than that, I love how the girl giggles with the idea of her friends ditching on her on purpose and the casual chemistry she had with the dude. I also love her last line which was "That's my dream". Its perfect ending line. Though if you were to know that you could have write more, than you can lure the reader more with what the girl is thinking more specifically.

Now not_so_lucky_girl, Though I was expecting a lot more words but the words you used to described how the damsel felt was what save your story a bit. The storyline of the scene was good. Its the kinda of scene that people would write when the guy can't hold his feeling anymore and he just grab the princess away and kissed her like that as if he set his decision to telling her how he feels. Its somehow sweet with a sprinkle of bitterness in it.

The winner is......Congratulations to not_so_lucky_girl!!!

3 comments:

  1. :B I'M FLATTERED XDD CONGRATZ FRAN FOR WINNINGGGG!!!! BAHAHAHAHA!!! YYYYAAYYY ( I DONT KNOW WHY IM HAPPY PROBABLY CUZ IM BACK IN PET SOCIETY OR EITHER ITS MY BIPOLAR MANIASSSSSSS ) XPPP

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  2. OMG!!! Thanks u so much!! Congratz to u too Niko for writing a great story! >.<

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