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Friday, September 23, 2011

Competition

This is my 2nd competition and it'll be a bit trickier than the last one. This is for those who are my commenters and for girls obviously. Moving aside the sexist statement, the prizes are jewellary which will only be further specified at the announcement post of the winner. Note there is no s at the end of the last word in the previous sentence.

I want you to do a lovey-dovey scene using Damian, Amber, Joshua and Ever ONLY. The thing about this is you can make any one of the characters be with any other partners. You can go DamianxEver or AmberxJoshua or you can use the usual couples or maybe if you're confident, you can do a explicit relationship of AmberxEver and DamianxJoshua. I'm very open minded so yeah I support that last suggestion if you want to but keep in mind that whn you describe them, please make sure they don't act like someone other then who they are in my stories. Its insulting to me. So you can make a sweet love scene or a hot steamy, I'm all arms for it! Who knows, if you can balance the logic and the daring storyline in ur post, you might win on the spot. Plus, it doesn't have to be entirely lovey and steamy, just MOSTLY. You can like add a drama, like say Amber and Ever is making out and Joshua enters and caught them. Something like that would definently make me excited to read!

Have to be at LEAST 5 paragraphs or more! (3 sentences= an actual paragraph. So any sentence less than that doesn't count as a paragraph kay?) Sorry I didn't post earlier :P

So the expiry date is 3 November and I'll really looking forward to your post. Please post it only on this post kay?

P.S. if you doing explicit relationship, I'll accept if the characters are different cuz they would be different if they were in to explicit relatioships)

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  3. --Continue from the latest post of the story--

    PART 1

    Amber POV

    "Now compare THAT with the one with Amber"

    I couldn't believe it. Ever just kissed Damian! How can mine be compared to Ever's? I bet Damian is swooning over Ever right now. As the scene of Ever and Damian kissing played in my mind over and over again, I remembered Joshua.

    What would Joshua feel if he hear about this? Should I tell him? But if something bad happens, the blame would be on me. No, let me just find him first and see if I should tell him.

    I took one feather and pictured Joshua. Then I felt a wind passed me and...I fell. At first I don't know what I fell on until a voice said, "Amber, please get off me". I look up and saw Joshua's face in front of me.

    "I-I'm sorry" I said as I quickly get off him. "It's...It's ok" he said as he blushed a little. I blushed a little too. I mean, anyone could blush in that situation right? And this situation is too awkward for me to say about Ever.

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    Joshua POV

    "So what's up?" I said finally. "You wouldn't use a transporting spell just to fall on me, would you?" I said sarcastically. Amber giggled. "Er...actually, it's not really important" she said as she fiddle with her fingers.

    "Ok then. Have you seen Ever? She left the library just now" I asked. "Urm...Ever? N-no. I d-didn't see her" she replied. I stared at her. I don't know why but something's bothering me. It's like she's lying or something but she doesn't look like the type to lie. 'Unless she have to', I thought.

    "Then, isn't Damian with you?" I asked. "Oh Damian. I kinda don't wanna see him at the moment" she said as she turned her head. NOW something's really bothering me. Something must have happened between them and somehow my insticts are telling me that Ever's involved. No, that couldn't be it. What the hell am I thinking?

    "Urm...have you eaten yet?" Amber's voice brought me back to reality. "Huh? Er... no..why?" I replied. "It's just that I'm kinda hungry right now and I can offer my self to pay for your lunch too. Just to say I'm sorry for falling on you" she said, smiling.

    I laughed and Amber giggled. Even though she can be a bit shy--or a bad liar, she's actually a very sweet girl.

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    Amber POV

    'Phew! That was close!' is what I thought. Luckily, I did not say a word about Ever or else--no, it's best if I don't think what might happen next. But when Ever kissed Damian just like that, it brought my spirit down. I need to bring Joshua to someplace that's far away from them.

    "You ok?" Joshua's voice awaken me from my thoughts. "Huh? ...No, I'm fine" I smiled, trying to conceal my depression. Apparently, that did not work.

    "You can tell me, you know" he said but I shook my head. 'Ever should double-check her scan before she kissed Damian' I thought quietly. 'I know she wants to help but what if he choose HER?'. Suddenly, without me realising it, tears rolled down my cheeks.

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    Joshua POV

    "Amber?!? What's wrong??!" I exclaimed as she dropped to her knees, trying to hide her tears. "No! No! Why now?" she said as she wiped her tears but the tears keep coming. I bent down as I lent her my handkerchief.

    "I think we need a quieter place. Transport us to the quitest part of the library" I instucted her as she finished wiping her tears. Legend says that an angel's tears are very valuable but for what? As she took out a feather, I found myself in the library surrounded by shelves of books.

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  4. PART 2

    --Continuation of Joshua POV--

    I chose a spot behind the one of the large shelves and sat down. "Sit here" I said as I patted the spot next to me. Amber slowly kneeled beside me and started to open her mouth.

    "I...er...you sure you wanna know?" she asked with her concerned eyes. "Yes, I wanna know. I think it will help you relieve yourself from whatever is making you like this" I said with my convinced voice. She sighed and said, "Just...don't be upset ok?"

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    Amber POV

    I hesitated at first and made myself comfortable before I started telling Joshua what happened. "I saw Ever...kissed Damian" I said the last part really quickly until Joshua said, "WHAT?!?"

    "Are you sure??" he said again.
    "Yes, I'm sure" I said, feeling guilty.
    "...w-why?"
    "It's kinda hard to explain..."

    So, I told him what happened last night in the Noble Night Ball and what happenend in the garden with Ever and Damian. "So...you're saying that she kissed him so that Damian can compare your kiss with her??!" he said in a devastated voice. "Yes..." I said meekly.

    It went silent again as Joshua stood up and ruffling his hair. "Well, I mean it's not that bad right? She's only kissing for your sake I guess" he said as he bent down to face me again. "I guess so..." I said, unsure whether I should say anything. "Right! See, Ever wouldn't do that. She wouldn't fall for Damian..." he said, suddenly sounding less optimistic at the last part.

    He looked like he was about to break into millions of pieces. I felt sad for him too. And that's where I suddenly betrayed my love for Damian; I hugged Joshua.

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    Joshua POV

    Amber suddenly hugged me. Why? Why do I feel so warm when this angel hugged me? No one but Ever can make me feel warm--until now.

    I hugged her back, remembering that she too was suffering when she saw Damian's kiss with another girl and the high chance to fall for that girl must be crushing her inside. I'm so stupid. She's suffering more than me because I know that Ever is already mine.

    But, I betrayed her when I suddenly kissed Amber on the lips. I can't understand my own actions nor Amber's when she didn't fight back. What a strange feeling. I know that I'm betraying Ever but I don't feel like it anymore as I deepen the kiss with Amber.

    ---THE END---

    P.S. I'm sorry Taty if I made any mistakes with their personalities and the grammar mistakes too. So what you think of my JoshuaXAmber story? ^.^

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  5. AmberXDamian~
    Part 1~

    Amber Pov~
    I wake up to a blinding white light that’s piercing through my eyelids. “Mpphmmm” the words leave my lips incoherently as I stretched my arms lazily, and felt a cold breeze ran past my bare arms. Bare arms? I don’t even like sleeping naked!! I open my eyes and notice that this is not even my room….Then.. WHERE AM I?? I quickly sit up straight and pull the covers higher to hide my bare upper torso. I slick my hair back and scan the room.This doesn’t even look like it would be our academy’s dorm...

    *spshh spshh* *squeak*

    I turn my head around to find the owner of the noise...As if on cue a door on the far end left side opens. A silhouette of a guy with blonde hair and some brown streaks,wearing a white robe..I wonder who is that ... forget the wonder....He’s coming to my direction... I see’s him more clearly..its...DAMIAN?!?!?!Why is he here? Wait wait.. What am I doing here?...without clothes...

    Damian Pov

    *spshh spshh* *squeak*

    I open the bathroom door to see Amber sitting straight up on the bed with her eyes widened and cheek flush more pink than I’ve ever seen..I bet she must be confused and shock. Her beautiful long silver hair falls back on her shoulders perfectly, her beautiful amethyst eyes are so alluring and those cute pink lips looks just cute and kissable. How I wish I close just push her down and attack her..But of course I won’t..

    Amber Pov

    Damian is crawling up the bed!! What am I going to do? What am I going to do?!?! I quickly shut my eyes tight although I know that will help nothing.
    “Open your eyes Amber, I’m not going to do anything so don’t worry”
    I open one of my eyes to find that Damian just sitting on the other side of the bed. Then I open both of my eyes.

    “I’ll stay right here looking at the wall so you go into the bathroom and take a bath, and don’t worry about clothes, I prepared a new set of clothes for you in the bathroom. Oh and leave questions for later okay? If you’re going to ask what happened think of what could possibly happened with you and me in a hotel..And try to remember last night”

    I just nodded then quickly ran to the bathroom, as I was and AM naked...So this is a hotel?!..What would we do in a hotel??Hrmm.. I lock the door and leaves the water running to warm up the bathroom up.. I adjust the water temperature and let the hot water run through my body. What did happened last night? I keep asking myself this question the whole time Im bathing but only bits and pieces came back...

    *Flashback*

    Ever kissed Damian...Its none of my business but why do I feel...sad..and..angry..I kind of feel cheated..As if Damian even meant it when he kissed me..I know he doesn’t but..why? why do I feel torn up..Was Damian just playing around? Does he like Ever? My mind is in a mess right now... what do I do? I run away from there as quietly as possible and went to walk around town.. Where am I now? Its getting quite dark.. I should head back...
    “Hey!! Pretty lady, why don’t you come in and have a drink?? You look pretty sad!” “Urm.. no thanks..I need to urm go home now..” “Hey!! Come on!!A drink wouldn’t hurt right”
    I don’t even have the chance to talk back and the woman dragged me into some bar..a cocktail bar? “Here drink up!! It’s called Long Island”
    I take the drink since it looks like iced lemon tea.. The women and I chatted for quite some time and I told her about Damian and the ball and.....
    *End of (some what-not) Flashback*

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  6. AmberXDamian
    Part 2~ The continuation
    Amber POV
    I can’t remember anymore...So.... What happened after that and how did I end up in a hotel..naked..What’s more..How did I end up with Damian?!?D-did we do i-it?!?! I’ve got to ask him..but how? After half an hour of bathing and half an hour of thinking and thinking I change into a new fresh set of clothes that Damian prepared for me, an off shoulder pearl blue T-shirt with an acid wash short..I get out of the toilet to see Damian in a Black and yellow-ish plaid shirt and jeans.
    “Lets..go back to the academy, by bus.. is it alright?”
    “Y-yes..”
    He gave me a small smile and took my hand and left the hotel room and checked out.After that we waited at a bus stop for a bus.He held my hand the whole time even after we left the hotel..But I can’t even look him in the eyes...Now I really want to know what happened yesterday night..But when and how am I going to ask him?

    “Here, Amber, urmm..take this bag.. It has your dirty clothes in it.You can keep the bag, no need to return it back to me”
    He hands me the black sling bag that he had all morning. I take the bag and he suddenly pats my head..

    Damian Pov
    I pat her on her head and she turns her face away.. She’s...blushing!! I chuckle soft enough not to let her notice.I wonder if she remembers about last night?Does she think we “DID” it? This is getting interesting..Should I tell her that nothing happened?

    *Flashback*
    "Well..Now compare THAT to the one with Amber."I look at Ever with wide eyes.. Why did you do that?!?! *Gshh shh* I turn my head and using my... neko power I see Amber?!?!? She must have saw that? What is she going to think? Crap!!

    (Nobody POV)
    Damian left Ever there but Ever just nodded and tells Damian to follow Amber.. He followed her the whole day until she reaches the bar..

    (Back to Damian’s Pov)

    “What is she doing?!? That’s an alchoholic drink!! Does she not know what Long Island is?!?”
    *After about two hours*
    SERIOUSLY? FIVE FIVE FRIKING CUPS OF LONG ISLAND?? ARE YOU KIDDING ME AMBER?!?! She seems drunk..Wait no she MUST be drunk I mean who wouldn’t be?Amber seems drunk..so is that women that dragged her in..

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  7. AmberXDamian
    Part 3 (Yes Sorry another part ><.. Too many words i guess?Sorru~ Its the last~)
    Damian Pov

    (Again its Nobody POV)

    Damian carried Amber from the bar to a hotel that was near the area. He gently lay her on the bed as he takes care of her the whole night..Around midnight Amber started vomiting and began drunk talk..And she doesn’t seem like her anymore..But you know..drunk talk are usually half of what true feelings are...
    “Hot!! Its so hot!!” She started taking off her brown jacket then she takes off her white top and her knee length pants..
    “Amber!!Stop!!Don’t take off your clothes!!”
    “Damian?? Hehe Damian its you...You’re here? Where am I??” I try to pull her top back down but she crashed her lips into mine..I want to break it off but..Our kiss deepens and I just don’t want to stop anymore..She finally breaks off the kiss to catch her breath..
    “Damian~” She’s calling my name so.. Seductively.. Why Amber are you trying to seduce me? NONONO... She must be really drunk..
    “Amber!!Stop taking your clothes off, I’m going to rape you if you continue!”
    “No!! Damian I want you..I want you so badly!!...Why? Don’t you want me?”Tears started rolling down her cheeks.. “I...l-love you ... But you kissed..Ever..Do you know how hurt I am?..Why?!! Why did you kiss me if you dint mean it?”
    “I...I do... I think...I l-like you to..So don’t cry.. y-you want me right? Are you sure you’re willing to do it? Don’t regret” She dint reply me but gave me a kiss instead.. I push her down the bed and get on top of her and I unhook her bra off..and starts kissing her from her neck and all the way down to her stomach then all the way up to her lips again. I trace her lips with my tongue asking her to let my tongue in. She opens her mouth and our tongues meet and have a little fight as they meet.The room started getting heated but I break off the kiss get off her and covers her upper torso.. “D-damian...Why are y-you stopping?” “...This isn’t working out.. I... I can’t do it..” “Why?....” “I don’t want to do it with you when you won’t even remember it.. You’re only accepting this because the alcohol took over you..Amber..I’ll..Wait.. I’ll wait for the day that you accept me when your yourself.. okay?” Amber closes her eyes and nodded a bit.. and fell asleep just like that..
    *End of Flashback*
    “Damian?? Damian?Are you okay?The bus is here!”
    “Huh?? Oh okay..” We got on the bus and found an empty seat..

    (Again its Nobody POV)

    The trip back to the academy took an hour,half way Amber feel asleep on Damian’s shoulder and Damian said to Amber “I’ll wait.. I’ll wait for that day”Then he smiled as he too fell asleep as he rests his head on top of Amber's...

    ~The End~
    Tell me whaddaya think!! Though its kinda long.. and i'm not sure it makes sense or not~

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